Thinking of fall in New England–an interview with Mark Willen

Today I have author Mark Willen joining me for an interview. Mark’s second novel, Hawke’s Return, recently came out, with another ethical dilemma for retired lawyer Jonas Hawke and new challenges for his family and friends in Beacon Junction, Vermont. It’s a great read and a timely one, as this time of year I am really missing the beauty of New England. Mark has a third book in the works for Jonas Hawke, and since he’s a member of my critique group I’ve had a sneak peek. You’ll also want to check out the first book in the series, Hawke’s Point, which looks like it’s only $.99 for Kindle right now!

Hawke's Return by [Willen, Mark]It’s his word against hers, and the stakes couldn’t be higher.

When a teenager accuses a key official of a local charity of blackmailing her for sex—and then abruptly disappears—a mystery turns into a crisis, raising concerns about the girl’s safety, the charity’s survival, and the career and reputation of a man who says he is innocent.

Enter Jonas Hawke, retired lawyer and sage of Beacon Junction. Jonas has just agreed to oversee the charitable group, a friend’s attempt to help Jonas move past his grief over the death of his wife. It’s his job to uncover the facts and ensure that justice will be done.

Jonas is helped—and hindered—by the arrival of Dylan Walker and his eight-year-old son. Why a single dad has chosen to move to a small town in Vermont to start a new life is a mystery that tugs at Jonas, especially when Dylan develops an amorous interest in Jonas’s married daughter.

Hawke’s Return is the tale of a man groping his way back from the loss of his beloved soul mate, even as he struggles with an intractable dilemma.

Q: Where were you born? How many places have you lived?

A: I’m a New England boy, for sure. I was born and raised in and around Hartford, CT, then went to college in New Hampshire, just across the river from Vermont. I eventually moved down to the greater Washington DC area and have lived here ever since, with the exception of a couple of years in New York City.

Q: What sparked your interest in writing?

A: I think I was hooked in the 9th grade when one of my short stories won an honorable mention in the Hartford Courant’s short story contest. In college, I got the journalism bug and switched to nonfiction, which satisfied my creative urge for a while, but when I got promoted and became an editor, I really missed writing. I started to dabble in fiction again, eventually going back to school to get an MA in creative writing.

Q: How long has it taken to finish your novels? How many drafts did you write before you were satisfied?

A: I write in spurts so it varies a lot. Once I know my characters and have a rough idea of what I want them to do, I can bear down, especially now that I’m retired from the 9-5 world. I wrote the first draft of my third novel, due out a year from now, in seven weeks. But of course that’s just the first draft. Revision can take many months. I don’t usually write a fresh second draft, so it’s hard to count those. I just keep rewriting sections that fall flat, cut a lot, and add a lot too. I tend to write sparse first drafts and then go back and flesh out the important stuff, which isn’t always apparent even to me when I’m writing the first draft.

Q: I’m from Massachusetts and I love the small-town Vermont setting in Hawke’s Point and Hawke’s Return. What made you decide on Vermont for the setting of the series?

A: It actually began with the character, Jonas Hawke. I created him as part of an exercise, and once I got to know him, I realized he had to be a Vermonter. And I wanted a small town, and that’s what Vermont is all about. In college, I worked as a news reporter and got to travel to many parts of Vermont, so I felt like I knew it pretty well, though I go back regularly to do more research and refresh my memories.

Q: Do you have a favorite genre to write? To read?

A: The books I write, and many that I like to read, don’t fall easily into any one genre, which can be a real problem when it comes to marketing. I’m fascinated by ethics (I taught journalism ethics for a while), and I like to put ethical quandaries at the heart of my novels. I don’t like the black-white choices; I look for problems with no easy answers and try to put well-meaning people in a difficult jam, where knowing what the right thing to do is far from obvious. So that tends to mean character-driven literary fiction, though I always try to work in some suspense to help keep the plot moving. That’s also the kind of novel I most enjoy reading, though for escapism, I read a lot of mysteries and thrillers.

Q: Do you have any advice for aspiring writers?

A: Don’t give up your day job! Actually, my advice depends on their answers to a key question – why do you write? There are all sorts of excellent reasons, but it’s important to know what yours are. Beyond that, I tell them them to read a LOT and to keep writing and experimenting until they find what works for them. There are good courses and critique groups, and they’re great for getting early feedback. But be discriminating and know you’ll never make everyone happy. Writing is so subjective. Keep an open mind when someone criticizes or offers suggestions, but you have to stay true to what you want to do.

Q: Name a few authors who have inspired you and why.

A: The list changes all the time as I discover new people. This year, I’ve been wowed by Nathan Englander, Patrick Modiano, Miriam Toews, and Anthony Murra. Long-term influences include Richard Russo, Ward Just, Elizabeth Strout, Jane Gardam, John Williams, and Penelope Lively. Whenever I read a good novel that touches something inside me, it inspires me to rush to the computer and try to do that for my readers. But it also can be discouraging because a part of me keeps saying, “but you’ll never be that good.”

Q: Tell us about your current writing project.

A: I don’t have one!! I’ve just turned in the manuscript for the third book in the Jonas Hawke series, and I haven’t decided what to do next. I have one more book due in my contract, but I think it’s time for a break from Jonas. Fortunately, my publisher is open to something different. I’m going to take the next few months to play with some ideas and see what grabs me. (As a member of my critique group, you’ll probably get an early peek.)

Q: What books are you currently reading or on your to-be-read list?

A: I’m currently reading—and loving—A Gentleman in Moscow by Amor Towles, and next up will be John LeCarre’s new one, A Legacy of Spies. Then it’s Marilyn Robinson, whom I’ve never read (shame on me!). Not too far down the road, I hope, is your book, the sequel to Thief of Hope.

Q: Coffee, tea, or hard liquor? (or all three?)

Hard liquor, I’m afraid, though not until after the day’s writing is done. Straight water until then!

Q: If you could be a character in one of your favorite novels, which character would you be and why?  

A: James Bond, of course. (But I’ll settle for George Smiley.)

Mark WillenMark Willen was born, raised, and educated in New England, where he developed a special appreciation for the values, humor, and strength of its people, as well as the sense of community that characterizes so many of its small towns. As a journalist, he has been a reporter, columnist, blogger, producer, and editor at The Voice of America, National Public Radio, Congressional Quarterly, Bloomberg News, and Kiplinger. His short stories have been published in The Rusty Nail, Corner Club Press, and The Boiler Review. His first two novels, Hawke’s Point and Hawke’s Return, were released by Pen-L Publishing, and the third book in the series is due out in 2018. Mark is also a regular contributor to Late Last Night Books, a blogzine about reading and fiction. He lives with his wife in Silver Spring, Maryland.

Guest post – Changing of the seasons

Fall is one of my favorite times of year. Please welcome Jordan K. Rose and her views on the changing seasons!

Fall in Massachusetts, photo taken by Cindy's mom

I live in New England where we experience each one of the four seasons. Rainy spring weather rolls into glorious sunny summer. Autumn slides in with the last of the beautiful beach weather fading into October’s changing red, gold and brown leaves. Then winter hits. It literally slaps its way in. Temperatures drop. Snow falls. Doors and windows slam shut and the sun rises and sets so fast you’d think we lived in Alaska.

If you’re like me, you notice the changing of each season. Even the subtleties like the scent of spring showers washing away the last of the frozen mounds of snow or the combination wardrobe every woman pulls together as she grumbles her way from sleeveless tops into bulky sweaters as October tries to hold on to Indian Summer while November elbows its way in with temperatures hovering in the forties.

Over the years I’ve realized that I’m my most active at the changing of the seasons, when everything is in flux. The unsettled atmosphere makes it difficult for me to sit still. I have to get things done. I clean the house and plan for holidays or family events, even if they’re months away. Ideas for future books or current storylines pop into my head every time I turn a corner.

The atmospheric tumult, however smooth or disastrous affects me and everyone in my path. My husband and dog experience the upset with things getting turned upside down as the need to clean hits. Things get moved. New systems are developed and any complaining, or in the dog’s case, following me around, ears drooping and moping, are not tolerated. Change must happen.

Thankfully, the seasons turn fairly quickly. There’s only so much activity one woman and her household can tolerate. After that, it’s a quick trip to the psych ward for everyone, including the mopey dog.

Over the years I’ve realized that my life is seasonal. For example, although I love the summer months, they are the least productive for me because I bask in summer fun- the beach, cookouts, fairs.

Also in Massachusetts, photo by Cindy, a favorite walk in the woods

It’s the cold, dreary months when I’m most creative. The months when I can’t sit in a bathing suit and listen to the waves on the beach, when I can’t bear the thought of leaving the house because I don’t want to freeze my toes off. Late autumn through to mid spring is when I’m at my keyboard rapidly trying to get my characters’ stories onto the pages.

Oh, yes, I write all year, most everyday. But in the summer months with the windows open and the ocean calling me I don’t spend entire weekends writing. I don’t want to miss out on all the fun. So I write in the morning and at the end of the day each day. And enjoy the summer.

In the winter I write and write and write. So even though all the lovely warm weather is ending and we’re heading into blustery cold, dark months, I’m elated. It’s writing season and I have plenty of characters with lots and lots to share!

What about you? When are you most productive?

After trying her hand at many, many things – from crafting and art classes to cooking and sewing classes to running her own handbag business, Jordan finally figured out how to channel her creativity. With an active imagination and a little encouragement from her husband she sat down and began to write, each night clicking away at the keys with her black Labrador, Dino curled up under the desk. A few short years later she’s entered the publishing arena with no plans to ever turn back. Jordan’s a member of RWA National, and the New England (NEC), Connecticut, and Fantasy, Futuristic and Paranormal (FFnP) Chapters. Visit her website at www.jordankrose.com.

Jordan’s novel,  Perpetual Light, will be released in winter 2012 by Crescent Moon Press. A reincarnated woman must trust the husband she condemned three hundred and fifty years ago to help her defeat a power-hungry vampire hell-bent on ruling the world. As a Pharo of Redemption Lucia DiComano must destroy Samuel, a master vampire who’ll stop at nothing to possess her powers. But centuries of avoiding this task have weakened her. Now, in order to save all of creation she must rely on Vittorio, the man who holds the key to her soul, the very same vampire who changed her destiny
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