Happy release day to Journey to Hope!

Journey to Hope, my short story prequel to Thief of Hope, is finally here! It’s only $.99, less than a cup of coffee! I think you’ll enjoy this little story about Edgar and his past.

Journey to HopeAs the third son of a lesser nobleman, Edgar Gray’s prospects are limited at best. He longs to find some meaning in a life of privilege. A chance encounter with Rose, a peasant girl, gives him a chance to help those in need. But the Guild has spread to Tipton Village, and unrest is brewing among the villagers. Edgar and Rose are torn between love, duty, and loyalty to family, and the rise of the Guild threatens to destroy Edgar’s very way of life.

Sometimes there is no escaping destiny, but even sacrifice can lead to hope.

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Room 3 book tour

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I’m excited to be part of Jonathan D Allen’s book tour for Room 3, his new release. I’ve got a giveaway and some great excerpt to share.

room3_rb_4cBook Blurb:
Torn away from everyday life and held prisoner in a tiny cabin, Kelli Foster must harden herself to survive torture and isolation. When Carla is introduced to Kelli’s small world, the experiments they are forced to endure take a dark turn. Kelli is forced to choose: Save her own life, or free her new friend? Sacrifice her dreams or sacrifice her love?

Following a failed escape attempt, Kelli, Carla, and Kelli’s lover Samarta work together to unravel the mystery behind the shadowy group that has kidnapped them all. Their path to freedom lies through mind-bending discoveries and globe-trotting adventures, culminating in a battle between godlike beings that hold Kelli’s fate in their hands.

Born and raised in the rural Shenandoah Valley of Virginia, Jonathan D Allen wrote his first Jacket Photo2fantasy/sci-fi novel at the age of 13. After studying writing and communication at James Madison University, Jonathan turned his passion for writing into a full-time technical writing career in the DC Metro area, working for companies like Sprint/Nextel, Time Warner Cable, and Sirius XM Radio, where he had an opportunity to combine his love of music with his love of writing.

He may have drifted away from fiction at times, but it was always his first love – and he always returned to it. Now living in Bethesda with his wife, two cats, and two quirky guinea pigs for which his publishing company is named, he crafts the kinds of stories that he had always hoped to read but just couldn’t quite find.

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Room 3 Excerpt 1

This is the first time we see one of Kelli’s visions, following a an injection of the mysterious hallucinogen.

Something rustled in the corn. I whirled, but I knew who it would be before she even appeared. She always found me. “Mimi?”

A little girl appeared from between the rows, pushing the bottoms of the stalks apart. She had blue eyes, dark brown hair, and a smile that could just melt your heart – the kind of smile that never, ever survives into adulthood.

She cocked her head. “How’d you know my name?”

She always asked me that.

“We’ve met, but I’ve told you that before, too.”

She put her hands on her little hips. “How come I don’t remember you?”

“I think it’s this place. It always makes you forget.”

“I don’t like that.”

I looked around. “I don’t like it much, either. But don’t worry about it. I’m here.”

Wheels turned in her head. “But why are you here?”

No clue how to answer that one. “You’re looking for something, right?”

She nodded.

I leaned down, putting my hands on my knees. “What are you looking for, sweetheart?” I already knew the answer, but this had gone down a certain path forever, and the show had to go on.

She rubbed her eyes. “Cici’s gone. I can’t find her.”

Cici. The girl forever searched for Cici. I had no idea if she even existed. “Now where did you last see your sister?” I said.

Her eyes widened, like I’d shown her the secret of the universe. “We did meet, didn’t we, that’s how you know about Cici?”

I nodded. “Where did you see her last?” Knew the answer to this one, too.

She pointed over my shoulder. “There.”

I knew what I’d see when I turned. I’d seen it so many times that I’d even started to see it in my dreams. It didn’t matter, though. Every single time I turned to gaze on it, it knocked me on my proverbial butt: an enormous, gnarled tree, soaring up into the sky. This wasn’t just any tree, though. Somebody had carved a wooden organ out of the trunk, with two levels of wooden keys and wooden pipes rising out of the higher reaches.
The largest keyhole you’ve ever seen had been connected to that organ, its details carved right into the trunk, between the keys and the pipes.

“She’s locked in there, isn’t she?”

Excerpt 2:

Carla shares one of her visions.

She turned her head toward me. It took me a little off-guard, because her eyes looked like deep black sockets, where no light ever escaped. “Have you ever seen somebody die?”

I thought of Gina. “I might have, yeah.”

She looked back to the ceiling. “When I was about 21, I lived in this little townhouse just outside DC. Southern Alexandria. Not the nicest place, at least in those days, but I took what I could get. Anyway, one day I went out with one of my roommates, I don’t remember why, probably to get groceries, something like that, and there was this little hill that you had to go up near where we lived. As we were going up the hill, we heard a weird sound, and saw a shower of sparks a few cars ahead of us.”

“Uh huh?” I said.

“The car pulled off the side of the road, and the sparks died down, but something rolled off from the back of the car. Couldn’t quite tell what it was. We were far enough away that it just looked like a blur.” She sighed. “When we drove by, we saw that the sparks had come from a guy on a motorcycle who had gotten hooked underneath the back of the car. I guess he was driving along and this old woman cut him off without even realizing it. When he hit his brakes, he slid up under her bumper and got stuck there.”

I put a hand to my mouth. “Jesus H. Christ.”

“Dragged him about 200 feet. We had to get out and try to help, but what could we do, other than call 911? Car was off in the grass on the side of the road, and the motorcycle was on its side, looking like something big had chewed on it. I remember the gas cap had come off at some point, because you could smell gas pouring out onto the grass. It was a bad sight, but my eyes were drawn to the guy who had been driving the motorcycle. You know how you can’t just look away?”

“I can imagine.”

“Yeah. He was lying down in the grass, arms up over his head, just breathing heavy. Not saying a word. When I got close, I could see that the bottom part of his right leg, from his knee down, was gone. It was nothing but ripped-up jeans. No blood, no bone. That bothered me the most, for some reason. My brain kept picking at that one thing – why was there no blood? My roommate told me later that it meant he was bleeding internally, and it must have been pretty bad.”

My stomach flopped over. “Good God, girl.”

“It took him a couple of minutes to die. I guess the internal injuries were too much for him or something. But you could see when he died. I never believed in souls or anything like that, but…his body shook and he went limp, and it was like, I don’t know, something beyond just electrical impulses left his body.” She shivered and wrapped her arms around her chest. “I’ll never forget it.”

Let me tell you, it was quite the conversational upper. I had all the joy that I might feel if I’d been hit by a freight train. “I’m sorry you had to see that, but why are you telling me this?”

“Because I saw all that again in Room 3. Only he was conscious. He kept looking at me with these hazel eyes and asking why I didn’t save him, where was the ambulance, how could I let another person die like that.” She looked at me. “But by the time he was talking to me, we were back in the room, and he was standing up, right behind Barren.”

Excerpt 3:

Samarta and Kelli arrive in Mexico and meet their handler.

Carlos gave these men a significant glance as he tucked his shades into his shirt pocket. “Come,” he said, and led us to the farthest table, positioning us so that he could watch them over our backs. Once we had all settled, he rubbed his hands together, giving a fake, toothy grin. “So. Your crossing was uneventful, I take it?”

Sam shrugged, a hint of just how eager he was to get to know the real Carlos. Not that I was much more eager; the contradiction between the guy’s grin and demeanor versus what I saw in his eyes put my nerves on edge. The sooner we were finished here, the better.

He got it, and he didn’t protest. “Right. I am glad you are safe.” He reached in his pocket and slid a set of keys across the table, glancing at the drowsing men from the corner of his sad, dark eyes. He told us the street name and number of the safe house.

Sam swiped the keys and slid them into his pocket. We rose together, but Carlos had other plans. He touched our wrists and looked down toward our seats “Please. Just one more moment.”

“We need to get out of here,” I said.

“Please. In time.”

We sat.

He leaned even closer to us, his arms hugging the tabletop. “Listen, friends. You must take the warnings seriously. The deaths in this city, some are from the drugs, yes, but our mutual friends wage wars for the souls of humanity with us as their pawns. Even you are expendable.”

Something about the way he said it… “We’re not the first people to pass through on your watch, are we?”

He tightened his mouth, and shook his head.

“Not all of them got where they were going, either?”

He shook his head again.

Sam put his hand on mine. “We will be cautious.”

Meet the newest Game of Thrones fan

Winter is coming and there be spoilers ahead.

Yes, I’ve finally jumped on the Game of Thrones bandwagon. I’ve heard people raving about the books and the HBO series. I don’t have HBO, but I wanted to read the book before watching it anyway. Reading on the Kindle is deceptive, though. I knew the book was long, but I was thinking maybe five or six hundred pages. No, the book is actually 800+ pages. I had no idea until I looked it up. Good thing it was a compelling read!

I won’t say it was an easy read because yes, the story is grim. Bad things happen to good people. A lot of very bad things happen to good people. I hear that George R. R. Martin isn’t afraid to kill off main characters, which makes me worry that many of the characters I like won’t survive to the end of the series. There’s lots of violence, sex, rape, incest, cruelty, and more violence. I know people who were turned off by those things and didn’t like the book. Frankly, I’m surprised I liked it as much as I did, but I loved the realism. Life in the society Martin has described would be horribly grim. I love the political scheming. I love the shades of gray in all of the characters. No one is a hero. In fact, the people who try to stick to their principles and do the right thing (yes, I’m looking at you, Ned Stark) have a hard time surviving in the lion’s den. And the people you want to throttle most (can someone please hurl Joffrey off the castle wall?) seem to be winning.

Writing chapters using many points of view is an interesting technique. Each chapter is told from a single character’s point of view, so at times you go for many chapters without going back to that particular character. I worried it might be confusing at first, but I rather liked reading the different perspectives. I’ll have to see what I think after I’ve read one or two more books in the series.

Lest it seem all praise, there were a few things I didn’t like. Every time someone used the f-word, it took me right out of the story. It just didn’t fit with the language Martin had used. Finding good curse words is a challenge in fantasy. If you make one up you can end up with something like “by the balls of Baldur,” which just sounds silly, like something we would have said while playing D&D. I’m not sure what the solution is on that front. And some of the realism got a bit crude at times. Fine, you want to have your character go take a piss, but really, I don’t need to know that he’s shaking himself afterwards. Ick. Sometimes less is more. That goes for the sex scenes as well. I think Catelyn and Ned were the only ones with a normal, healthy relationship.

Maybe it’s just been a while since I’ve read epic fantasy, or at least a really good epic fantasy novel, but this book was a breath of fresh air to me as a fantasy author. It’s the kind of fantasy I like, very medieval, with plenty of sword fights and politics. The magic and magical creatures are subtle for now. I have a feeling the dragons and the Others are going to play a bigger role in future books, but I like the fact that there aren’t dragons on every corner and powerful wizards in every camp. I also felt the female characters were portrayed well. They were all strong in their own ways.

Favorite characters:

Tyrion Lannister: Hands down, I loved reading his chapters. He’s got to be one of the sharpest characters in the book and he has the best lines. (please please let him make it to the end of the series and get rid of the rest of his obnoxious family)

Arya Stark: I love a tomboy with a sword.

Jon Snow: I warmed up to him as the book went on and was a big fan by the end. I was going to be really disappointed if he deserted from the Wall, so I’m glad his friends brought him back.  I think he belongs there.

Ned Stark: Well, I liked Ned a lot at first, but as I mentioned above, his sense of honor and duty got to be tiring after a while. I lost a lot of respect for him after he confronted Cersei because it was such a terribly stupid thing to do. People, if you know an important secret, tell someone who needs to know while you have the chance!

Robert Baratheon: He was a fun character. Pig-headed, narrow minded, all of the things a good king shouldn’t be. I kind of wished he did have the chance to give it all up and ride off to be a sellsword king.

Characters I love to hate:

Joffrey Baratheon: Sansa should have pushed him when she had the chance.

Cersei and Jamie: I can only hope they get what’s coming to them.

Viserys Targaryen: The crown he finally received was much deserved.

Sansa Stark: She was an incredibly annoying character. The constant mooning over Joffrey was too much for me. But she faced a rude awakening at the end of the book, so I’m curious to see how she might evolve in the future.

I’ve watched the first two episodes of the first season. So far so good. I think they did a good job staying true to the book, although there is so much that doesn’t make it on screen.

And now on to Clash of Kings.

You know you’re a gamer when…

… you admit it on the internet! Aaron Michael Ritchey and I had a great interview on his blog: http://aaronmritchey.com/2012/02/16/i-get-real-with-fantasy-author-cindy-young-turner-and-we-kill-hill-giants-and-talk-dodecahedron-dice/. We chatted about fantasy, writing, and oh yeah, Dungeons & Dragons.

Would Sydney be part of the 99 percent?

I was recently talking with a friend about book marketing and she made a comment that my book has some timely themes because fighting oppression is an important element of the story. Considering the state of the world these days, it is a timely topic, both here in the U.S. and around the world. Sydney, the heroine of Thief of Hope, is an unlikely leader, although she does have a strong sense of right and wrong and the desire to stand up for what’s right. She despises those with money and power and wants the commoners of the feudal society in which she lives to have a better quality of life and more control over their own lives. Hmm, sound familiar?

Anyone who knows me knows these are ideas that are important to me. I’m not sure I set out to incorporate them into the book, but they crept in there. My heroine is an illiterate pickpocket, occasional prostitute, and she’s also homeless. And she’s battled drug addiction. She’s not exactly a role model. She’s at the bottom of the barrel. Over the course of the book, however, she fights hand over fist to overcome her past and prove she is worthy of the expectations placed on her.

One of the things that drew me to the SF/fantasy genre is the ability to explore social issues in a different context. Lots of authors have done this brilliantly. Two of my favorites who immediately come to mind are Ursula K. LeGuin and Octavia Butler, whose books explore race and sex and other cultural issues. These large ideas, in my opinion, are what make a book “literature.” It doesn’t matter whether it’s set somewhere out in space or in an imaginary world. It makes you think or view your life or the lives of others in a different light. It touches you in some way. I can only hope to someday be able to do that with my writing.

I’m not sure Sydney would be hunkered down with the OWS protesters. It’s not exactly a fair comparison. The world of my book is much bleaker than what most of us experience in the United States and the setting is a feudal society where a select few have money and power and the rest of the population has very little and no rights. But as history has shown, people who are committed to their ideals and willing to fight for them can be a powerful force for change. Even in a made-up world.