Twists and turns of the writing process

Well, here we are in deepest winter and this snow lover is disappointed yet again in the lack of Maryland snowfall. There’s still hope, though. Sometimes February can be our lucky month. The good news is that after a Nov/Dec writing slump/holiday frenzy, I am back to writing and once again excited about working on Thief of Destiny. I’ve had ideas for future scenes flitting through my head, which is exciting and energizing. I hope this will give me the boost to finally finish the book because I really want to find out what’s going to happen. I envy those people who say that when they start writing a book they know how it’s going to end or even the exact last line. I have a general idea of how I think the book should end, but it’s not exact. Right now I’m giving Sydney and Willem a 50-50 chance and I’m not sure what they are going to do when I get to where I think I’m eventually going to end up. All the more reason to hurry up and get there, right?

The interesting thing is that I just wrote one of the few scenes that had been in my head when I began the book. And it turns out this scene was influenced by Journey to Hope, the prequel I wrote that came out last month. It’s nice that Crescent Moon Press has given their authors the opportunity to write short spin-off stories of their novels. At first I wasn’t sure what story I might want to write. I even polled my critique groups to see, as readers, whose story they might like to read about and got some varied answers. The story I ended up writing about Edgar’s past was not what I first had in mind. I wanted to be sure I didn’t have too many spoilers in case someone read the prequel before reading Thief of Hope. I think I mostly succeeded in that, although there are a couple spoilers but I don’t think they would detract from someone’s enjoyment of the novel. But writing this piece about Edgar fleshed out some important bits that show up in book 2 (how’s that for a vague teaser?) and I wonder what would have happened if I hadn’t written the prequel. Would book 2 have taken a different course? I’m quite happy with the way things are going, so I think it all happened for a reason. It’s funny how writing works out that way.

I’m hoping to do more reading in 2013 also. I just finished Clash of Kings (thoughts to come soon) and have book 3 of the Dark Tower series waiting on my shelf. I’m currently reading War of the Seasons: The Human, a young adult fantasy by Janine Spendlove, who I met at Balticon last year. What are you all reading so far this year?

Muse Online Writers Conference

This will be my second year doing a workshop for the Muse Online Writers Conference. My topic this time is point of view, and my workshop will be on Saturday, October 13.

Mastering Point of View
Are you a head hopper? Can’t decide between first person and third person? Or does the word “omniscient” make you want to run for the hills? Let’s talk point of view. I’ll cover the basics and provide examples to help you figure out what works best for your story. You’ll never be afraid of slipping into the dog’s point of view again—unless you mean it.

There is a whole week of free online workshops, but you have to register by September 3o. It’s all free. Once you register, you can access any of the workshops. So sign up and stop by and chat about point of view! I’ll be posting and responding to comments throughout the day on 10/13. And check out all of the other great workshops while you’re at it!

A Cthulhu out of the hat

I’m going to share the story I wrote at the A Cthulhu out of the Hat –  Writing Prompts for the Deranged panel at Balticon. The moderator provided a bag of stuff he’d picked up from his kids’ rooms and each panelist picked three items. We had about 20 minutes to write a story that included two of the items. Then we read them aloud. There were some really creative stories. I wish I’d thought to take a picture of my items, but I was too busy thinking about what I could possibly write. My prompts were a green rubber frog, a small plastic silver surfboard (another panelist helpfully identified it as being the Silver Surfer’s surfboard; I had no idea what it was), and something green that looked like a top and had circuits in it.

So here’s my story. I’ve just titled it now, but aside from fixing any spelling errors due to my crazy frantic handwriting, I haven’t changed anything.

The Strange Fate of Mr. Frog

Carlton Frog hadn’t taken a vacation in years, but the internet deal was nearly too good to be true–a house for rent in Ipswich, one week for the price of two days. Something told him not to pass up the opportunity, so after a few emails, he packed his bags and was on his way. Ipswich was a quaint town by the sea, cobblestone streets, historic houses, very quiet and peaceful. His rental was on an isolated bluff overlooking the rocky shoreline.

The old woman who let him in said she lived down the road and that the owner had asked her to take care of the rental. She had never seen the man before, but she seemed almost fearful. “You may want to come into town during the full moon,” she warned Carlton.

He merely chuckled and sent her on her way. Full moon? Really? As if there might be a werewolf or something hiding in the basement.

Carlton spent the day reading and relaxing. The house was old and quaint. It did have a basement, a dark foreboding place, with one locked door. He saw a strange light coming from beneath the door and heard a faint humming sound. A generator maybe? He tried to force the door but soon gave up, not willing to seem like a bad renter.

That night, a terrible storm blew up the coast. The windows rattled in their panes and the rain beat upon the roof in an ominous tattoo. Carlton jumped at a loud clap of thunder. Lightening flashed. There was a boom close by. The lights went out.

An unsettling fear crept over him, but he remained calm and found a flashlight in the kitchen. He carefully inspected all the rooms and found nothing amiss, save the pounding of his own heart.

And then, a humming sound began to fill the house. That noise from the basement was growing louder. Carlton steeled himself and slowly descended the rickety steps. Maybe it was an ancient furnace, he told himself.

The humming grew louder, and green light shone beneath the locked door. He pushed against it, calling, “Is something there?” No answer, but the humming grew louder, a strange pulsing in his blood. He had to open the door. Grabbing an axe from the workbench, he began to hack at the door until finally it crashed open.

Green light illuminated the room. The humming called to him, beckoning him closer. He entered, still holding the axe.

In the middle of the room was a strange metal object, almost like a green top. It was the source of the sound and the light.

What the hell, Carlton thought, mesmerized. He moved closer, wondering if he should call 911 first. No, that would be silly.

“We’ve been waiting for you,” a voice intoned.

Carlton reached out a trembling hand and touched it. A jolt of electricity seemed to shoot through him. He felt like he was flying–no, it was like he was surfing, riding wave after wave on a silver surfboard until it all crashed down.

With another clap of thunder, Carlton Frog was no more.

The gateway to the elder realm grew silent, waiting. Carlton Frog had helped, but he was not the answer to opening the doorway. No fear. Another would come.

The landlady next door came by later with a sigh as she collected Mr. Frog’s belongings and prepared to place another ad. The Elders would wait. She would soon find the one they sought.

Coming soon: A Midsummer Night’s Blog Hop

I’m so excited to be participating in the Midsummer Night’s Blog Hop, coming on June 21 and organized by soon to be published CMP author Wendy Russo! This blog hop features characters interviewing characters! Wendy threw names into a hat and this is what she came up with:

Cindy Young-Turner + Sasha Summers

Sydney has survived on the streets of Last Hope most of her life through pickpocketing and prostitution. Nineteen now, she’s a resistance fighter supporting a bastard prince. Whatever will she think of Poseidon, the sexy-and-he-knows-it God of the Seas? Hmm….

Do you think Sydney can hold her own against Poseidon (featured in Sasha’s novel, Medusa, a Love Story)? Check back on Thursday to find out!